This is my post on Josh Ben-Yaish's blog
This is a good start. I think you should talk more about the corporation (because I think that is what you seem to be focusing on). It would also be good to add quotes to back up your arguments.
This is my post on Gary Greene's blog
If you made some parts more detailed and take out the parts that are not that important in your paper it would flow better. Also, you should add evidence (but I'm sure you know that).
Friday, March 30, 2007
Sunday, March 4, 2007
I posted on Brian Spears' essay. This is what I said.
In France people eat much smaller portions. They also take a longer time to eat their meals. I know that most stores close for about 2 hours around lunch time so that the people can eat. Even though they are eating things that are not so good for them, i.e. lots of cheese and wine, they are still mostly healthy. There are also less obese people in France than in America. Your paper makes good points but you should back them up with actual facts.
In France people eat much smaller portions. They also take a longer time to eat their meals. I know that most stores close for about 2 hours around lunch time so that the people can eat. Even though they are eating things that are not so good for them, i.e. lots of cheese and wine, they are still mostly healthy. There are also less obese people in France than in America. Your paper makes good points but you should back them up with actual facts.
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