This is my post on Josh Ben-Yaish's blog
This is a good start. I think you should talk more about the corporation (because I think that is what you seem to be focusing on). It would also be good to add quotes to back up your arguments.
This is my post on Gary Greene's blog
If you made some parts more detailed and take out the parts that are not that important in your paper it would flow better. Also, you should add evidence (but I'm sure you know that).
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Markia,
Your comments are already helpful, and would be even better if you added specific details or quotes as signposts that your authors could use on the treasure map you are drawing for them.
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